Travel with me. Walk with me. Hold my hand as we make
our way one more time upon the Earth. You have given me
your smile, I have given you my tears until my heart explodes
with joy. Life is as it should be. The spirit in me
salutes the spirit in you as we make our way together. Love is
the only path that takes us home, and so we go.
© Tina Zabielski 2011-2019
So very deep and beautiful and I love that it speaks about how things truly are and should be, the side by side, not behind or in front. My favourite line:”The spirit in me
salutes the spirit in you as we make our way togethe”
Thank you, my friend. I hope you are well. 🙂
This is nice. Touching in a way.
Did you see my comment on Melody Maker?
Hey, Phil. Glad you liked it. I saw your suggestions for me on the character development, indeed I did. They shall be of use to me for sure. Thank you!
Here is another link that could come in useful:
She’s got some interesting concepts about writing.